What Works Assignment 2/18

The Man Who Shot Osama Bin Laden……is Screwed

The title of this story immediately catches the eye of the reader.  The majority of Americans are infatuated with the Seal Team that killed Osama Bin Laden and want to know who killed the world’s most wanted terrorist.  So it’s the irony of the title that draws most people in.  The reader wants to know why one of America’s heroes is screwed.

The author does a phenomenal job of weaving personal and professional aspects of the Shooter’s life into a story that makes the reader feel like they know the Shooter even without knowing his real name.  The reader finds out fairly quickly that the Shooter has children and the pain that came with having to leave them with every tour of duty.  The reader is able to see the Shooter as a “human” and not just a killing machine.

The author does a good job of highlighting the issue of veteran unemployment throughout the piece.  The author is able to use the Shooter as an example of this issue while jumping back and forth between the Shooter’s past, present and future.

The author begins the story with a soft lead and hooks the reader immediately by using the phrase, “the man who shot and killed Osama Bin Laden.”  I think the author does a great job of explaining the setting of whatever scene is being described and does so in a way that makes the reader feel like they are there.

It isn’t until paragraph 17 that the nutgraph occurs.  The author takes the time to describe the circumstances and events that have shaped the Shooter’s life.  There is an undercurrent of suspense throughout the piece that propels the reader to keep reading.

I think it is important to note that the author is able to take a national issue of high veteran unemployment and apply it to a specific person who just happens to be the man that shot Osama Bin Laden.

The whole story has an element of secrecy to it considering that no names or detailed physical descriptions can be revealed.  However, it is obvious that the author has done a great deal of research for this piece to make it legitimate.  He interviews the Shooter who can be considered an official source.  The Shooter was the main source and it seems like the author has done several interviews with him at several places.  The Shooter’s father, the Shooter’s wife, a former Seal and mentor to the Shooter, the Shooter’s comrade, Marine major general Mike Myatt, retired rear admiral and former SEAL, a third-generation military man, Twitter CEO Dick Costolo and Orbitz chairman Jeff Clarke are all sources.  However, not many names are actually used.

Considering that the story is based around a top-secret mission and involves hidden identities, the author does a pretty good job of including multimedia elements into the story.  Pictures of the Shooter’s gear during the Osama Bin Laden raid, the Abbottabad Compound, and the Situation Room at the White House during the Bin Laden raid are included as multimedia items.  Also a graphic of veteran unemployment and a video clip of President Obama telling the world that Osama Bin Laden had been killed are used.  I think all of these multimedia elements are beneficial to the story.

However I would have liked to see a video clip of the movie Zero Dark Thirty since the author watches that movie with the Shooter and gets his reactions to it.  Although Zero Dark Thirty doesn’t portray exactly what happened, it still would give the reader an idea of what kind of experience it was for the Shooter—in a visual manner instead of just using print to describe it.  There was also a part in the story where the Shooter couldn’t believe how many people took to the streets by the White House the night Osama Bin Laden had been killed to cheer and chant in celebration.  I think having examples of tweets from ordinary Americans expressing their reactions would be a value added multimedia element.

Although, the story is long, I think it has to be in order to fully describe the many aspects of the Shooter’s life.  The way the author balances his own writing with the Shooter’s voice makes the reader feel like they know America’s hero without even meeting him.


Jour. 377 Vardaman: The Sweet Potato Capital of the World

The small farming town of Vardaman, Miss. depends on one thing: the sweet potato.  Farmers labor in fields as far as the eye can see to grow this crop.  No farmer claims it’s an easy job, but for many, farming runs in their blood.  It’s what they do.

By Ellen Graves

Photo by Ellen Graves

Mini Sweet Potato Pies at the Sweet Potato Festival
Photo by Ellen Graves

You can’t see it, but there is a fingerprint on every sweet potato grown in Vardaman, Miss.  The fingerprint is from a worker who has labored on a hot, humid day in a field filled with thousands of sweet potatoes.

Vardaman’s foundation is built on sweet potatoes and the farming families depend on it for their livelihood.  This small farming town has a total of 104 farming operations and 25 packing sheds.

Benny Graves, the Executive Director of the Mississippi Sweet Potato Council (who also happens to be my father), has worked with Vardaman’s sweet potato industry for over 30 years.

“It’s a hard-working, hard-scrabble town.  Growing sweet potatoes, producing this food crop is hard work and these people are not scared of hard work,” Graves said.

The first sweet potato farmers arrived in Vardaman in 1910 and created farming operations that have been passed down from generation to generation.

Farmer Tim Edmondson of Edmondson Farms has lived in Vardaman his whole life.

“Well my family had always been farmers and I really enjoyed it as I was growing up and working,” Edmonson said.  “The bug was there and I always wanted to farm.”

The Vardaman sweet potato industry makes up 80 percent of the 22,000 acres of

Photo By SELF Magazine

Photo By SELF Magazine

sweet potatoes grown in Mississippi.  The U.S. produces about 110,000 acres a year.

In 2011, the Mississippi sweet potato industry accounted for $78 million of Mississippi’s total $7 billion agriculture revenue.

“This is one of those crops that when you are growing, you are creating wealth that’s coming from Mother Nature’s sunshine, water, and good soil,” Graves said.

Several factors go into making Vardaman a good fit for the sweet potato.

“We have great soil and we have people that know how to grow sweet potatoes,” Graves said.  “This knowledge is not gained in a book or the university that teaches you how to grow sweet potatoes.  You gain this knowledge from experience and from generations that have done it before you.”

“You know I’ve had some friends in North Carolina that’s been down here and they’ve actually gotten the soil in jars and carried it back to North Carolina State University to try and see what’s in our soil that makes the potatoes look like they do.  And you know, they just can’t figure it out,” Edmondson said.

The sweet potato season starts in March and ends with harvesting in the first week of November.

“Sweet potatoes are a vegetatively propagated produce item,” Graves said. “That means they don’t have any true seed so you have to go to the mother plant that was developed at a research facility and get your plant material from them.”

The process begins by planting the best seed potatoes in March and allowing them to grow for six weeks until plants are produced.  After the plants reach a height of 10 inches, they are cut and planted in the field during May and June.

Each plant grows four to seven sweet potatoes and 13,000 plants can be planted to an acre.  Farmers must go back to seed labs like the one at Louisiana State University every three or four years for certified seed stock.

“If you’re not careful, you grow your own potatoes and have them cycle over and over for three or four years, they will mutate and it won’t be as tasty or pretty shaped,” Graves said.

Edmondson typically grows 2,800 acres of sweet potatoes and operates a packing shed that has about 60 million pounds of potatoes that come through a year.

One of the major concerns each farmer faces is how the weather will affect their crop.

“Mother Nature controls everything that we do and we just know that going in,” Edmondson said.  “You learn to manage your money real well.  When the good years come you stick it back and hold it for the bad ones because you know it’s coming.”

Graves also shares the same concern about the weather but notes that farmers do their best to minimize disaster like the one they had in 2009.

“Well we try to maximize our chances of making a good crop, but we are always battling the weather,” Graves said.  “You don’t plant all your crop in just one place because one location may not get a rain.  If you plant it in three locations, spread it out, you may have a chance.“

Edmondson’s high school sweetheart, Stephanie, never thought she would wind up being a farmer’s wife.  She has learned how unpredictable the farming industry can be.

“In good years you just are thankful and the bad years you thank God that the good years are coming. We’ve had bad years but we’ve always pulled through some way,” Stephanie said.

Farmers not only work during planting season, but all year selling and transporting their crops to customers.

“Many of the growers are also their own broker.  They do it all.  Grow and sell and manage the money,” Graves said.

“It’s more of a business, a technology-based business,” Edmondson said.  “We all have smart phones, computer screens, iPads.  We’re working on those things as much as we’re driving a tractor.”

Technology has become more integrated with the farming industry and farmers are beginning to understand its benefits.

“We have temperature controlled storage now and that’s a big change.  We are able to store sweet potatoes, high quality sweet potatoes year round that allows us a much larger marketing time,” Graves said.

Also, farmers are using global positioning technology to calculate the exact amount of potatoes they can get from the field.

“You have some that are the early adopters.  Some that are later, old-fashioned, but you generally see the more successful ones are the ones that adopt technology first,” Graves said.

Farmers in Vardaman sell sweet potatoes to the fresh market and food service sectors.  Sweet potatoes have been gaining more popularity in the past couple of years with more restaurants putting them on their menus.

“Sweet potato french fries have just taken off.  Right now we are excited about Burger King being the first large chain that has added sweet potatoes to the menu,” Graves said.

With so many Vardaman farmers pushing the same product, competition is inevitable.

“There’s only so many customers that buy sweet potatoes in the country.  We’re all gonna run into each other sooner or later,” Edmondson said.

“They compete on one hand, but if someone needs some help they will be the first one to lend a hand,” Graves said.  “Most of the time we just try to sell more sweet potatoes on the plate instead of fighting each other and try to build this thing.”

Although technology has provided several advantages for the farmer, the sweet potato industry is not one that is highly mechanized.  Often farmers have to hire nonimmigrant Hispanic workers from Mexico through the H-2A program to have a workforce large enough to use during the growing season.

“The guys come in on the visa program and work x amount of hours, x amount of months.  They work and they go back,” Edmondson said.  “Everything is offered equally to an American citizen just as it is a Hispanic.  It’s just very hard manual labor, and most people do not want to do it.”

“There is not a machine that takes it from the ground and puts it in the box. Somebody has to place that potato with their hands into that box,” Graves said.  “So there is multiple levels where someone, basic labor, is needed to move the potatoes.”

At times Graves and Edmondson think the farming industry is underappreciated.

“We don’t get a lot of glory,” Graves said.  “It’s not a glitzy crop.  It’s a sweet potato, a basic comfort food that’s not gonna be like a fancy strawberry.”

However, events like the annual Sweet Potato Festival are held each year in Vardaman during the first weekend in November to promote the sweet potato.

“It started back in the days of Gov. Bill Waller when they designated Vardaman as the ‘Sweet Potato Capital of the World’ and started the festival to celebrate the end of the harvest,” Graves said.

“My family has always come over to the Sweet Potato Festival.  It’s kinda been a traditional thing we do every year,” festival attendee Cortez Moss said.  “So I drove on over to hang out and actually get some sweet potatoes to take back to Greenwood.”

For Edmondson, being his own boss and working with the land is his favorite part of being a sweet potato farmer.

“I love the outdoors… you kinda see God’s work in your farming from start to finish, the harvest and it’s just something I love every year,” Edmondson said.

Even on Edmondson’s toughest day of farming, he has his reasons for not giving up.

“Maybe my car payment and my mortgage payment,” Edmondson said with a laugh.  “And maybe that I know tomorrow will be better. That’s about the only hope that you have.”